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Ansam WIP4 by ~Ahuvah:iconAhuvah:


©2007-2009 ~Ahuvah
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You don't even want to know how hard it was to get here... omgoodness. So I thought I lost like 4 hours of work on this (I had colors all wrong etc ;P) then I found out (after I had spent all of the next night redoing it of course) that it had been saved in a different folder. ANYWAY the first one was still better than the second one which I was halfheartedly working at ^^;
End of long story. This is the third try at mane's using *Losmios 's tutorial... I'm not sure if this is the look I'm going for ? Anyway ;P I'm still not really happy with it...PLEASE critique... I think it's way to thick ;P and looks goofy.
Anything else? Don't think so. Anyways...didn't bother with the legs yet guys so I know they're still needing work ;) oh and ignore the tail it doesn't exhist yet k ?
:heart: I have spent soo many hours on this, I'm so lost! :XD:

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:iconscenceable:
it's coming along really well. I don't know anything about computer painting so couldn't give you advice, lol
:iconahuvah:
:hug: Thank you! =D that's okay, thanks for the comment!

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:iconelvandia:
It's turning out very lovely though I think the mane's just a bit too thick. Can't wait to see more done on it!

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:iconahuvah:
Do you have any suggestions on how to fix it ? I ... arr... I'm not sure...
:hug: thanks, lol next time I'll have a good deal more done before I submit another WIP I was just sorta...arr...about the mane

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:iconfire-n-ash:
OH MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :faint: That is absolutely PHENOMINAL!!!! Keep at it....or else! :shakefist:

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:iconelvandia:
Perhaps take the smudge tool and smudge it toward the neck, if that makes sense.:XD: Or you could make thin pieces of blue on the inside.

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WOOOOOOOOOOOW!! O.O

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It shows that you're putting very much effort into this. I see the problem with the mane. Try to make it a bit less less ordered... break the highlight pattern with some darker areas to make it look less like a thick solid bunch of hair. And also dare to make the hair go to several different directions. I've seen your ref, you just have to trust on what you see there. ;)
I cannot really explain what I mean, so I made a few alterations in your drawing with my non-existent digital drawing skills. ^^; I took liberty to change a couple of other smaller details too. ;) I'm not sure if you'll even notice them. Anyway, I'm sorry I made it all blur and horrible but I really don't have any good enough digital program and I cannot draw digitally. But I hope this: [link] helps you to see, what I mean. Once again, if you don't wish this image to be online, I'll take it off immediately when you ask. I just found this the best way to describe what you could try.
Keep working! :hug:

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:iconemele-the-strange:
Wow!
It's looking amazing!
Keep at it, I know the end result will be....really, really good =] :hug:
:iconahuvah:
:hug: Thanks ;) I hope so, I'm a little...unsatisfied with it at the moment

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